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Tom
Jul 3, 2014 7:59:25 GMT -5
Post by Jordyn on Jul 3, 2014 7:59:25 GMT -5
Age: 26 Gender: Male Profession: Knight (Note: This may change on a later date, if OK) Appearance: Tom is a giant of a man standing at 6' 4". Despite his height, however, he has cat-like reflexes, and a sharp wit to go along with it. He has shaggy brown hair and green eyes that have a hint of mischief in them, but can turn cold when he means business. He does not like wearing his court armour, preferring to wear his worn looking travel armour. Under that he normally wears dark colors. Brown riding boots that almost touch his knees complete the look. Personality: Tom is a person of two different personalities. One is his 'Lover Boy' personality, where he is calm and sweet. The second is his battle personality, where he is cold and ruthless. History: His history is mostly unknown. Besides the fact that his parents were wealthy, we don't know much about his childhood until he became a knight. He has fought many times, and is very loyal-some times dangerously so. Additional Details: Has a slight crush on Emily... Based off a friend of mine that I meet at Camp.
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Tom
Jul 3, 2014 21:54:20 GMT -5
Post by Brandwyn on Jul 3, 2014 21:54:20 GMT -5
I am not following what you are trying to say in this sentance:
"He has fought burnished times, and is very loyal-some times dangerously so. "
Could you elaborate?
Or could you reword this?
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Tom
Aug 2, 2014 19:49:32 GMT -5
Post by Brandwyn on Aug 2, 2014 19:49:32 GMT -5
Jordyn, did you still want this character?
I just wanted you to reword that one sentence because it doesn't make sense.
thanks!
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Tom
Aug 5, 2014 13:30:32 GMT -5
via mobile
Post by Jordyn on Aug 5, 2014 13:30:32 GMT -5
Hi! I'm sorry, things have been really busy on my end
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Tom
Aug 29, 2014 5:42:31 GMT -5
Post by Jordyn on Aug 29, 2014 5:42:31 GMT -5
Edited.
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Tom
Sept 1, 2014 15:56:59 GMT -5
Post by Brandwyn on Sept 1, 2014 15:56:59 GMT -5
Approved.
You might want to flesh the character out a bit more as time goes on though. He would know his own background unless he had some sort of memory loss and if a wealthy family, even with memory loss others would know of him and be able to fill in a lot of the details. Unless he is not from Araluen originally. It could be that he just likes to keep his past secret. Anyway, I am sure as you play him that will eventually be worked out and something revealed.
But you can begin playing him now.
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