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Post by newo on Aug 23, 2017 23:00:21 GMT -5
Age: 24 Profession: Freelance tracker/Hunter
Appearance: 5'6 Small stature and stockly built. Deep blue eyes when visible underneath a mass of dark brown hair. Warm smile when rarely seen. Thick fur cap made from a redfox, leather jerken that falls to waist height. Thick linen pants tucked into knee high seal skinned boots. Two small throwing axs hung on a tanned matte black belt along with large hunting bow made of yew wood slung over left shoulder along side a small quiver of arrows.
Orgin: Picta/ Unknown
History: Last seen in the mountains of Norgate feif. Know to have traveled far and wide in the search of knowledge and history. Given to the Scottie warleaders at a young age Robin has know nothing but the hard life of a Scottie soldier....
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Post by Brandwyn on Aug 26, 2017 22:19:35 GMT -5
I like your character concept. Very nice description of his appearance.
Can you tell us a bit more about his personality? Does he have any likes or dislikes? A sense of humor? character flaws? Fleshing out your character will make it easier for you to role-play him.
It is fine to model your character after historical figures, or other characters in literature that you like or consider heroes, but we want you to make your character YOUR own. I notice that your character's name is a rather famous character from a movie and actually has some basis in history. Your character description, however is a bit different from the Robin Longstride played by Russell Crowe in "Robin" but when people see your character's name, they are naturally going to think it is the Russell Crowe character.
Therefore I would like to suggest that you change the name a little. Keep Robin, or keep Longstride, or add something else to the name so people will know you are not trying to play that character from the movie. Make him Your character.
Thanks for joining Halts Playground and for considering these suggestions for your character. We want you to have fun here and are glad you found us and have started what looks like it is going to be an awesome character.
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